tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post585645271150024259..comments2023-10-15T07:33:47.896-07:00Comments on Hunting Sea Glass with Wolves: A Minor BreakoutJenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-29141158672574561882011-09-23T06:34:08.053-07:002011-09-23T06:34:08.053-07:00This was interesting and a little disturbing- but ...This was interesting and a little disturbing- but in a good way! A mystery until the end. Great job!Alison Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14675871531099412006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-64240287045538761742011-09-22T23:23:33.910-07:002011-09-22T23:23:33.910-07:00Sir, I love this comment.Sir, I love this comment.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-32936263974195741692011-09-22T21:31:45.851-07:002011-09-22T21:31:45.851-07:00This was outstanding. Especially the 'Dylan o...This was outstanding. Especially the 'Dylan or something'. The non-naked Mr. Peanut-as-conscience was great, too, but you had me at 'Dylan or something'.You can call me, 'Sir'https://www.blogger.com/profile/15345750651304133484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-13167589243296724742011-09-21T16:58:01.274-07:002011-09-21T16:58:01.274-07:00This was such a fun piece and a very creative (and...This was such a fun piece and a very creative (and unexpected) ending. I love how you ended the story, too: giving closure to a story to which we are not privy but which is highly intriguing! Nice job.<br />- KarlaKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00543334704879531796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-88269250522938575362011-09-20T17:00:11.034-07:002011-09-20T17:00:11.034-07:00Great ending. I liked this a lot.Great ending. I liked this a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-63173709967121782642011-09-19T13:12:32.295-07:002011-09-19T13:12:32.295-07:00i totally didn't know where this was going to ...i totally didn't know where this was going to go. at first i thought it could have been a pimple or a hive or something and she was just a total drama queen, so i was surprised at how it turned out! nice job. welcome to the challenge, stick around! <br /><br />also, best line: "It tasted like broken glass on fire" < i've never heard a better description of vodka, haha!Alyssahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13390697943483129220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-33645230440858558922011-09-19T12:00:08.575-07:002011-09-19T12:00:08.575-07:00as soon as you mentioned the little man I imagined...as soon as you mentioned the little man I imagined that devil/angel combo on the shoulders so I guess I was already leaning towards conscience :)<br /><br />delightfulCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-33228355168772557102011-09-19T09:53:05.396-07:002011-09-19T09:53:05.396-07:00Wow, what a great take on the prompt. I love the d...Wow, what a great take on the prompt. I love the description of the conscience looking like Mr Peanut - my conscience may never look the same to me again. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-14349970860759022302011-09-19T01:10:20.144-07:002011-09-19T01:10:20.144-07:00I never would have thought conscience but I like i...I never would have thought conscience but I like it. The conscience growing on one's shoulder is definitely scary and it even makes me want to hear more of the story.Hannah Pratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241656929267868673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-50588461714235238222011-09-18T21:55:47.236-07:002011-09-18T21:55:47.236-07:00I thought she was just totally hallucinating lol g...I thought she was just totally hallucinating lol great story. I too would love to read more of this.Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16939247188746797886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-74414149395194368652011-09-18T18:48:07.274-07:002011-09-18T18:48:07.274-07:00Thanks! Is it just me or is anyone else scared of...Thanks! Is it just me or is anyone else scared of Jiminy Cricket?Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-33784703832295156692011-09-18T17:16:14.402-07:002011-09-18T17:16:14.402-07:00Oooh I wanna hear more! I loved that ended up bei...Oooh I wanna hear more! I loved that ended up being conscience! I was so on the "chronic disease", "fibromyalgia", "lupus" path!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10153763725824114654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-34448044505725200712011-09-18T12:26:10.577-07:002011-09-18T12:26:10.577-07:00Oooh, I liked this. I thought demon, too, but I li...Oooh, I liked this. I thought demon, too, but I like your ending better. I'd love to see what happens next with her. <br /><br />There was a movie that came out in the 80s, called How To Get Ahead In Advertising. It was bizarre - I thought this might be going the same way. <br /><br />(For some reason, I can't sign in with my google account - it's Major Bedhead)Helena Handbaskethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17913585858446874414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-27778452688332696682011-09-17T18:30:36.396-07:002011-09-17T18:30:36.396-07:00Jennifer,
Thanks for stopping by. I wasn't sur...Jennifer,<br />Thanks for stopping by. I wasn't sure where the story was going to go until I got to the end. I want it to be part of a larger story.Debra Gray-Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13836657468924341727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-45623494262263553322011-09-17T16:56:12.466-07:002011-09-17T16:56:12.466-07:00Hahahah. That's what I thought at first too!Hahahah. That's what I thought at first too!Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8768758004994506276.post-28822263963026429382011-09-17T16:53:06.470-07:002011-09-17T16:53:06.470-07:00I love the way this ended. I at first thought it m...I love the way this ended. I at first thought it might me a demon boring creatures. Glad it ended the way it did.Debra Gray-Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13836657468924341727noreply@blogger.com